Troubled 9-14-10

Posted: April 12, 2011 in Creative Writing


breaking from within

virulent melancholy

I fall apart

Rust that eats through the sloughs of pride

Layers of sand clawed by Neptunes retreat

steady knees buckle in utter  defeat

a lone tear rips as sorrows wept

I tread empty in spaces of chaos

neither in cold calm is there peace

even in sleep there is no rest

an angel with broken wings

a captive of guilt and regret

  1. belladonna23 says:

    loved it man, and ur right, it’s alot like how i write sometimes

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